Hey, so here’s the start of my series of blogs/vlogs on editing
your novels! I thought I’d start off with a check list of the most important
things you need to check for in your work. It’s so important that you get these
things right, as these are the basics of a novel that you have to get right in
order to get anywhere else.
11)
Check for spelling and grammar mistakes. That’s
an obvious one really, because spelling and grammar are very important things.
Spelling should be relatively easy thanks to spell check, but grammar is a bit
harder to deal with, but there’s a few things you can do to help yourself out.
One is to read your work allowed to yourself, speaking and reading engages
different parts of the brain, so you pick up more mistakes if you’re reading
aloud. It sounds nuts, I know, but it actually works. I’ve done it before, and
have had it recommended by several tutors so I know it works a treat. And two, you can use a website called
Hemingway, which checks through your work and clearly highlights sentences that
need improving. I’ve used it loads and it works great.
22)
Check your story for coherency. Make sure that
your story makes sense and that it is easy to understand. I’m not saying you
can’t have a convoluted plot, if you want that, go for it, but you have to make
it easy to understand, or you will lose your readers. Make sure that you’ve
explained your plot fully in your story as you’ve gone along, and not suddenly
including an important element with no explanation as to how it got there.
33)
Make sure you have tied up all loose ends.
Unless you’re writing a series and are planning on tying up loose ends in a
further book, all the fragments of the story have to come together to make
sense by the end. Go through and make a list of all your plot points, and check
off each thing you resolve and see if you have anything left over by the end.
If you do, you’re probably going to have to go back and resolve that point
somewhere. Obviously, if you’re planning a series out, you can resolve plot
points in a further book, but make sure that by the end of the series you have
actually done that. As for one off books, then you have to resolve all plot points
or you’re going to anger a lot of readers, as they will want answers.
44)
Make sure you’re consistent. If you’ve started
writing in first person, make sure you’ve stayed in first person throughout,
unless you have a specific reason to change it. Check to make sure your
characters physical attributes are consistent and haven’t suddenly changed for
no reason, make sure you’ve kept to the same tense throughout (a
flashback/memory is mostly where a change from present to past tense is
allowed, everything else should be in the same tense). All of these things are
really important, and you have to make sure you have kept everything like that
the exact same way throughout the novel, unless there’s reason for things to
change. If there’s no need for things to suddenly jump from present to past
tense, then make sure you’ve stayed in the original tense.
55)
Keep your story line on the right track. You have
to be certain that you’ve kept to your story line from the beginning until the
end. A story is going to go nowhere if your character starts off trying to find
their parents at the beginning, and ends up battling demons by the end, unless
they have been drawn into doing that while on their original quest. If they’ve
completed their original quest and have had to go on another straight away, fair
enough, but you have to make sure that that original quest has come to
completion by the end.
It’s all about consistency people;
every single thing has to be consistent and kept on a similar path. And yes,
editing is boring, I know. But it’s
an incredibly important part of the writing process, and will be the thing that
sharpens your story into the incredible epic it can be. The editing is so, so
important, and you have to check for these things and change anything that is
wrong, or your novel won’t go anywhere.
If you guys have anything else
you check for when you’re editing your stories, please comment below, I’ll add
anything to this main post, or start a new one, so we can create one massive
checklist of editing!